Review: The Change by Angela White
Title: The Change (The Bachelor Battles #1)
Author: Angela White
Genre: Dystopia / Romance
Publisher: Cloud 9 Publications
Publication Date: 3 July 2011
Format: eBook / Paperback
Buy: Amazon UK Amazon US
My Rating: 2 of 5 stars
This book had all of the makings of a great post-apocalyptic adventure, but somewhere along the way the story got lost and kind of bent out of shape! It turned into a painful reminder of what self-publishing can give us and why every writer (even those who self publish) really need an editor.
I ended up spending more time focusing on the exhaustive mistakes throughout the text, not just grammatical or spelling but in character continuity. The whole thing started to feel very rushed and towards the middle the story really started to fall apart.
Perhaps with more time, better editorial guidance this book would have lived up to it’s expectations but for me it just didn’t get there.